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This is from a
Keep Me In Suspense blog article.
This is a paraphrase of a question recently posted to the blog.
Here’s the original:
I
heard you don't always have to have a dead body.
What other crimes are fitting for a cozy? The one
I'm brainstorming calls for something like a missing
artifact or forged relic. Would that work?
Short answer. Possibly. In combination with another
crime. I’ll explain after I digress into a deeper
explanation of cozies, and from that, I think,
you’ll understand my answer.
Cozies are an interesting child in the family of
mystery and suspense. At first glance, they seem
tame. A good cozy, whether secular or inspirational,
has no blatant sex or violence. This doesn’t mean
such things don’t occur behind the scenes, but they
don’t happen on stage, written in the pages of the
book.
In reality, the most well written cozies aren’t tame
at all. They explore the depths of the human psyche.
Characters seethe with emotion, which is often
hidden by the veneer of civility. I’m sure some
people think a cozy mystery is easy to write, as far
as mysteries go. That couldn’t be further from the
truth.
Suspect characters, as Lisa said in her blog entry,
are essential. That means a large cast of people.
The characterization alone makes a cozy difficult to
write. Each of these suspects needs to be
identifiable and needs the motivation to have
committed the crime. That means a cozy mystery
writer has to understand what makes people tick. The
author must be willing to explore the depths of
human emotion. Greed, jealousy, hatred, anger,
revenge, lust. . . And then the author has to be
able to slowly and subtly reveal those emotions in
the actions of the characters. That’s not easy to
do. Each character must be different, with their own
definite personality. I think that’s partially what
is meant by “quirky” characters. Often a small quirk
is what makes a character memorable.
A personal observation here: sometimes inspirational
writers want to sugarcoat their characters. They are
uncomfortable in exploring the depth of sin it takes
to commit a murder, for example. And some Christian
authors avoid depth of conflict. This is probably
because they don’t like conflict in their own lives,
and they don’t like to think about the ugly side of
life. I have only to point to the Bible for a good
example of conflict and depth of sin. Every evil
motivation known to man is contained within the
pages of the Bible. In addition, the only way to
keep the interest of the reader is
conflict, conflict, conflict. As Donald
Maass says, think of the worst thing that can happen
to a character, then make it more horrible.
Okay, back to cozies. The reason that murder is
often used in a cozy is whatever crime is committed
must be significant enough to make a sleuth willing
to pay the price to solve the crime, and the villain
willing to pay the price to hide and/or stop the
crime from being solved.
Here are some rules to remember:
1. A crime must occur at the beginning of the book.
In most cozies that crime is a murder. It doesn’t
have to be, but whatever it is has got to be
significant and propel the sleuth into action.
Murder can also be committed in the course of
another crime. Or additional crimes can occur along
the way.
2. The sleuthing must start shortly after the crime
is discovered. And the sleuth needs a good reason to
be solving the crime.
3. You must be fair to your readers. All the
suspects must be revealed before the middle of the
book. The clues the hero/heroine discovers along the
way must be available to the reader. Don’t throw in
facts that will determine the solution to the crime
toward the end of the book without foreshadowing
them at the beginning.
4. You must have a sufficient number of suspects to
keep the reader guessing.
5. The mystery has to be investigated and solved.
The hero or heroine can’t just bumble along,
stumbling over clues. The main character must
actively solve the crime, even if law enforcement
solves the crime, too.
So, back to the original question. A
missing artifact or forged relic would work in
combination with another crime. For instance,
perhaps a collector realizes that one piece of his
priceless collection is a forgery. It is, in fact, a
replacement for the original. Because of this
realization, somebody is murdered. Maybe the
collector. Or a family member. Or the forger. Make
it significant. Make it cost somebody dearly. And
then make everyone who matters pay a steep price in
the resolution of the mystery.
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