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This is from a
Keep Me In Suspense blog article.
Gina recently posted a question that we thought might be a good
topic for a blog article. So, I’ll be answering her
question in more detail than she probably wanted, just
to make sure I cover the topic. (I’m not usually a big
talker in person, but give me a keyboard, and I can
blabber with the best of them.)
Here is Gina’s question:
I'm plotting book one of my cozy mystery and wondered if
there was a "rule" as to how many POVs there are in a "cozy?"I
was planning on writing in first person, but then
wondered if I should be in any other POVs. I'm used to
writing suspense and this is my first attempt at a cozy.
No
official rules that I know of. (Like
I haven't found a book out there that lists the Ten
Authoritative Rules for Writing a Cozy and Don't You
Dare Break Them or You're a Failure.) But I
think that many traditional cozy mysteries are in a
single, first person POV. In fact, I’ll go out on a limb
and say that most traditional cozies have only one or
two POVs. (Someone might argue with me, and that's okay.
In addition, I've noticed that, like clothes, writing
styles change ever so slightly throughout the years.)
If you think about Agatha Christie or the American cozy
writer, Diane Mott Davidson, both write in a single POV.
Sherlock Holmes mysteries are told through Dr. Watson.
At the library recently, I came across another cozy
mystery writer named Sarah Graves (secular). Hers are
first person, too, but she began one of her books in the
POV of the victim who was dead by the end of the
prologue—obviously there were no more scenes in that POV.
I’ve noticed other variations, as well. Veronica Heley
often writes short scenes in the anonymous bad guy’s POV.
I think that might be a trend now, as I've seen it in
others, too. Some of the cozies that Heartsong will be
publishing have two POVs, and the authors have done a
great job incorporating the second POV without losing
the cozy flavor.
The risk you take adding more POVs (particularly if the
second POV is the romantic interest) is that the book
might sound more like a suspense or a romantic suspense.
So, if you’re aiming for the cozy flavor, you need to
watch for that.
My Heartsong Presents: Mysteries cozies are the
traditional, single, first person POV. (Like Gina, I do
also write other suspense genres.) I like the voice of
first person for my cozies and the simplicity of just
one POV. Keeps me from slipping into the suspense mode.
But simplicity doesn’t translate into easy. When I write
books with two or more POVs, I can flip from person to
person to reveal everything I want revealed. In my
cozies, everything has to be revealed through one
person’s eyes. The challenge is to avoid being BORING
and droning on and on about details that don’t matter a
hill of beans to the outcome of the story. Everything I
write has to have a good reason to be in the book and
has to advance the plot. If my character goes to the
grocery store, that’s a good place to run into someone
who is either a suspect or a bearer of clues. If my
character is doing the dishes, she’s also mulling over
clues and perhaps reaches another conclusion.
I also make sure there are other subplots that add
additional conflict for my character, but I try to make
that conflict tie into the mystery. In other words,
everything must advance the plot.
And if you’re aiming for HP Mysteries, remember there
needs to be a romantic thread. That doesn’t have to
involve the main character (can be a secondary
character) but a romantic thread needs to be there.
So, those are my thoughts about POV. Please feel free to
ask us more questions. We like questions.
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